User:Caramelized Mitochondria/Mutan/Xbeagley13 Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Caramelized mitochondria


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Well it seems like there is some work to do. I like how you have started pooling sources, especially things like the text book. A lot of what is in that source can be put into a great lead. I don't know if I can suggest anything for you all to do. So all I say is good luck!