User:Carbyb/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
White feminism.

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
White feminism is a topic that has personally interested me for a while. The way I came to understand feminism was very white and Western-centric and I didn't even realize up until recently as the notion of intersectionality makes its way to the forefront. I think this is an important issue that should be considered moving through the Fourth Wave of Feminism.

Evaluate the article
After reading through the history page for this article, I can see the biggest issue has been writing the article as a matter-of-fact instead of a point of view piece. The article often struggles to stay neutral; personal opinions are sprinkled throughout. It's also quite under-developed in some sections, notably Third-Wave Feminism. Some parts of the article seem to divert from the topic of White feminism specifically and go off on broader tangents. It's obviously just in the early stages of development – it needs more sources, sections and refinement (but it looks like it hasn't been touched since 2018). The links and citations I tried all seem to work. There are many great sources in this article, but only scratching the surface in terms of the amount of information referenced. This article is part of the following projects: Ethnic groups, Feminism, Gender studies, Women's History and Discrimination. In the Talk section, the only conversation being had was about finding the right tone and trying to avoid writing a POV article.