User:CardamomEnthusiast/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Gold digger

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I am researching different social/cultural ideas for a class, and this seemed like an interesting archetype to look into.

Evaluate the article
The definition introduced in the lead section is clear and concise, and the embedded links provide further context. There are numerous sources for the existing content and they are thorough and current. Each section of content provides valuable information and also has a lot of room to be expanded upon- for example, the Law section of the Society and Culture section would benefit from examples of/links to specific cases. The pop culture references presented as examples could also be refined and expanded upon.

Grammar:

In the Etymology and Usage section, the time tenses need to match.

In the General subheading of the Society and Culture section, the first sentence should either state that women have been perceived as gold diggers by the public, or it should specify the time period where women were perceived as gold diggers.