User:Care.03/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Performance Writing

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article due to its unknown nature to me as a researcher. I have always enjoyed theatre and writing and was interested to know about this new stylistic choice of performance.

Evaluate the article
This article does an effortful job of describing Performance Writing. The lead section is quite concise, however further details regarding the meshing of writing and other art forms, of which is Performance Writing, would have been helpful. This could include a clear example of the style to provide further understanding to researchers.

I appreciated the content of the article, however, do not have a full understanding of the topic as a whole. This article needs further chronicling of the topic which provides a neutral description and/or evaluation of a performance. The development of definition and events sections is enjoyable and gives a bigger picture of the use and implementation of performance writing. The history of Performance Writing, though, is quite confusing, pulling the reader in multiple directions and to multiple schools. I would like to see a more defined section here. Tonally, the article is quite neutral, with a slight lack of current events related to Performance Writing.

Overall, the article is a good starting point and needs slight modification to present readers with resources and an understanding of Performance Writing.