User:Care.03/Structuralism (psychology)/Malex7980 Peer Review

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Care 03
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Evaluate the drafted changes
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Lead: I like how you have made that leading statement shorter and more concise. Before it was full of too many words, and sometimes people just don't want to read all of those unnecessary wording. By moving the historical components of the article to a heading under that label helps a reader to distinguish this from the main article. You have also added some great detail to the history section by incorporating more decades and more recent findings. I don't see your secondary source where you took the information from. I think the content you intend to add is easy to read and well-organized and I think the addition of your content will only enhance the article's information. Great job.