User:Carla R2D2/sandbox

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Chronic traumatic encephalopathy


 * Article Evaluation
 * From the five options, I really enjoy this one because it's a theme I really like and kind of familiarized with. The article is relevant to the topic, all the information provided is important and clear. As I can see it is neutral, however, there are some parts in the information that the user provides and it doesn't present where did it they read it from.  It also has a lot of citations in every claim, and they are reliable.  It doesn't has equity gaps.  In the organization it has pretty good parts that are clear, but it gets a little repetitive in some due to the organization.  Also, the history is in the bottom...  About the grammar, there are some little errors.
 * Add movie about Bennet Omalu, Concussion.
 * I am a little bit worried because of the amount of serious information it has, but I really hope I can contribute to this great article.
 * Sources
 * Asken, BM; Sullan, MJ; DeKosky, ST; Jaffee, MS; Bauer, RM (1 October 2017). "Research Gaps and Controversies in Chronic Traumatic Encephalopathy: A Review". JAMA Neurology. 74 (10): 1255–1262. doi:10.1001/jamaneurol.2017.2396. PMID 28975240.
 * Stein, TD; Alvarez, VE; McKee, AC (2014). "Chronic traumatic encephalopathy: a spectrum of neuropathological changes following repetitive brain trauma in athletes and military personnel". Alzheimer's Research & Therapy. 6 (1): 4. doi:10.1186/alzrt234. PMC 3979082. PMID 24423082
 * Asken, BM; Sullan, MJ; DeKosky, ST; Jaffee, MS; Bauer, RM (1 October 2017). "Research Gaps and Controversies in Chronic Traumatic Encephalopathy: A Review". JAMA Neurology. 74 (10): 1255–1262. doi:10.1001/jamaneurol.2017.2396. PMID 28975240.
 * Stein, TD; Alvarez, VE; McKee, AC (2014). "Chronic traumatic encephalopathy: a spectrum of neuropathological changes following repetitive brain trauma in athletes and military personnel". Alzheimer's Research & Therapy. 6 (1): 4. doi:10.1186/alzrt234. PMC 3979082. PMID 24423082

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Neurogenesis


 * Article Evaluation
 * All what is presented is important for the reader or interested in the theme. Maybe add more information besides mammals will be great.  It is written neutrally and has reliable citations, which are in all claims.  It is also very well organized and has great grammar.  The article is rated as a C-class and High Importance in WikiProject Neuroscience. The talk page only has two advice improvements, the most recent one is from 2017.  Which means it is not that active.
 * Sources
 * ^ van Praag, Henriette; Schinder, Alejandro F.; Christie, Brian R.; Toni, Nicolas; Palmer, Theo D.; Gage, Fred H. (February 2002). "Functional neurogenesis in the adult hippocampus". Nature. 415 (6875): 1030–1034. doi:10.1038/4151030a. ISSN 1476-4687. PMID 11875571. S2CID 4403779.
 * Ernst, A; Alkass, K; Bernard, S; Salehpour, M; Perl, S; Tisdale, J; Possnert, G; Druid, H; Frisén, J (27 February 2014). "Neurogenesis in the striatum of the adult human brain". Cell. 156 (5): 1072–83. doi:10.1016/j.cell.2014.01.044. PMID
 * Ernst, A; Alkass, K; Bernard, S; Salehpour, M; Perl, S; Tisdale, J; Possnert, G; Druid, H; Frisén, J (27 February 2014). "Neurogenesis in the striatum of the adult human brain". Cell. 156 (5): 1072–83. doi:10.1016/j.cell.2014.01.044. PMID

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Genetic Variation
 * Article Evaluation
 * I also like reading and acquiring knowledge about genetics, because I find it really interesting. This article has very concise introduction, maybe it needs to be more broad.  All is relevant, however, I think it needs more information that can make the reader understand it better.  For example, it talks about the enzymes, catabolic or anabolic?  And it totally needs more information, the links inside the words are so poor too.  There are words the readers are not familiarized with.  Because it has too poor citations, the readers don't know if it's made up or real.  It could be not neutral and could be an original research.  It needs a lot more of citations, even the page at the beginning of the article asks you to edit it.  It has poor grammar and only FIVE REFERENCES!  No, it is not enough.
 * Sources
 * Darwin, 1845. Journal of researches into the natural history and geology of the countries visited during the voyage of H.M.S. Beagle round the world, under the Command of Capt. Fitz Roy, R.N. 2d edition.
 * ^ Pavlopoulos, GA; Oulas, A; Iacucci, E; Sifrim, A; Moreau, Y; Schneider, R; Aerts, J; Iliopoulos, I (25 July 2013). "Unraveling genomic variation from next generation sequencing data". BioData Mining. 6 (1): 13. doi:10.1186/1756-0381-6-13. PMC 3726446. PMID 23885890.
 * ^ Pavlopoulos, GA; Oulas, A; Iacucci, E; Sifrim, A; Moreau, Y; Schneider, R; Aerts, J; Iliopoulos, I (25 July 2013). "Unraveling genomic variation from next generation sequencing data". BioData Mining. 6 (1): 13. doi:10.1186/1756-0381-6-13. PMC 3726446. PMID 23885890.

Option 4

 * Article title
 * Forensic pathology


 * Article Evaluation
 * Besides being a doctor, I will also like to have a PhD in forensic pathology, it is one of my big dreams, this is why I chose this article. All the information from it, is relevant, but there is one link that doesn't lead to anything (Carl Liman).   And it doesn't has citations (some or any) so the readers can't know if its written from a neutral point of view, or to verify if is reliable.  It has 10 references, 8 bullets from sources (which doesn't describe their first or secondary sources) and a lot of external links.  It is rated as a C-class and Mid-Importance on WikiProject Medicine.
 * Sources
 * Bartos, Leah, "No Forensic Background? No Problem", ProPublica, April 17, 2012.
 * ^ The Coroner System. USW. http://www.usw.ca/program/content/3179.php Archived2009-11-13 at the Wayback Machine. Accessed on: 7 June 2007.
 * ^ Coroners' law resource. King's College London. http://www.kcl.ac.uk/depsta/law/research/coroners/canada.html . Accessed on: 7 June 2007.
 * ^ Lett D (July 2007). "National standards for forensic pathology training slow to develop". CMAJ. 177 (3): 240–1. doi:10.1503/cmaj.070881. PMC 1930175. PMID 17664437.
 * ^ Lett D (July 2007). "National standards for forensic pathology training slow to develop". CMAJ. 177 (3): 240–1. doi:10.1503/cmaj.070881. PMC 1930175. PMID 17664437.

Option 5

 * Article title
 * Gangrene

1.   ^ Amputations of the Lower Extremity at eMedicine
 * Article Evaluation
 * The information provided in the introduction was repeated in the first content (Table of Contents). It does has a lot of reliable citations, which also says that the article is done from a neutral point of view.  In terms of organization, I still consider that history should not be down the article.  One thing that I really enjoyed reading was the curious fact about the etymology.  It has a lot of references and two external links.  The talk page was very active, since 2005 until 2019.  There was a very interesting issue... the graphical image.  To be in peace with everyone, I would put a message up saying it can be sensitive content for some users.
 * Sources
 * Sources
 * Sources
 * Sources

2.   ^ A report on hospital gangrene, erysipelas and pyaemia. 1863

3.   ^ Liddell & Scott's Lexicon, Oxford University Press, 1963 edition