User:Carlahelou/Experiential education/IntlEd Matt Peer Review

General info
Carlahelou
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Carlahelou/Experiential education
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Experiential education

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

A newly created lead section has been added to the article, providing an introduction to the topic of experiential education. Within the lead section, an introductory sentence provides an overview of the whole article. The lead provides a good overview of the following article, concisely touching on most key areas. A few areas of the article are not mentioned explicitly in the lead, but this does not impact the understanding of the following article.

Content

Most edits have been focused on editing the existing content, making it easier to access and fitting with the style of Wikipedia. These edits are made to sections that are all relevant to experiential education. The one citation that has been added is from 1992, and although relevant to the article, I wonder if there is more recent research that could be added to further support this citation.

Tone and Balance

I would agree with the statement about the opening paragraph in the “Examples” section being biased towards a specific program. The content in this section is relevant, but it could be presented in a more neutral tone in line with other parts of the article. Adding more examples from the different experiential education models mentioned later in the article could also be good. This could help to present a more even and unbalanced perspective, especially if the examples are drawn from recent practice.

Organization

Through the edits that have been made and the content that has been added, the text has been cleaned up to correct grammatical and spelling errors in different sections across the whole article. The edits have also helped by removing some aspects of the original article that were not needed, which helps the general flow of the article.

The edits made to the article certainly improve its quality and make the information easier to access.