User:Carlarob412/Karma in Hinduism/Sehamahmadd Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Carlarob412)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User Carlarob412/Karma_in_Hinduism?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Karma in Hinduism
 * 1.Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic? Is there anything that distracted you?
 * Everything shown in sandbox was on topic. Nothing was off topic that was distracting. Carla is trying provide to the article the importance of reinterpreting religious principles like karma. What she has so far is good as it all ties together.
 * 2. Is the article neutral? Are there any claims, or frames, that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
 * The article is neutral, there isn't any claims or biased opinions. The article is showing a concept in Hinduism which is Karma. It only is speaking on this concept.
 * 3. Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
 * I think that Carla isn't representing her view on the importance of Karma as much as she should. Since she is trying to show that religious principles like karma are important her main focus should be on that.
 * 4. Check the citations. Do the links work? Does the source support the claims in the article?
 * There is only one link. Yes the link works. I don't know if this source was used. I cant see it. I think that Carla should add citations into the work she's doing so one can easily press and see where the information was got from.
 * 5. Is each fact supported by an appropriate, reliable reference? Where does the information come from? Are these neutral sources? If biased, is that bias noted?
 * More work should be done but from what is shown the reference is reliable. It is a neutral source that is not biased.
 * 6. Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that should be added?
 * I think this draft can be better if more information was to be added. Like why is religious principles important and what sources did you use to find that? Also why is the Bhagavad Gita as an important scripture source? How does the dedication to benevolence, applied spirituality, and religious activism relate to the important of religious principles.
 * I think this draft can be better if more information was to be added. Like why is religious principles important and what sources did you use to find that? Also why is the Bhagavad Gita as an important scripture source? How does the dedication to benevolence, applied spirituality, and religious activism relate to the important of religious principles.