User:Carleyblanchard3/Leggings/Mtstace Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Carleyblanchard3


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Carleyblanchard3/Leggings?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Leggings

Evaluate the drafted changes
You're off to a great start! One suggestion is just to make sure your sources end up being put into citations. It could also be helpful to make greater use of scholarly sources if that is at all possible. I would also recommend drafting out where your contributions would fit into the article that you are editing. Perhaps writing out a new heading for the section could be of some use. I would also be wary not to include too much personal opinion, it might be taken off of Wikipedia. It could be more helpful to put the opinions of prominent people in the debate so that they can be quoted.