User:Carlmo1357/Mighty girl effect/Jjennings23 Peer Review

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Carlmo1357


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Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: I think you have a very strong lead and it is very descriptive as well. It gives a nice opening while hitting major points of what you are discussing.

Content: Within your lead, your content is solid and concise. Seemed up to date on the topic.

Tone and Balance: Your tone was very balanced and I think outside readers will be informed and not so much pushed to one side than the other.

Sources and References: I think you have a great set of sources and the few that I did check through seemed very informative. Not only informative but credible for other readers to go back to.

Organization: I think the flow was very organized and concise. I like the paragraphs you broke them down in, it was a nice order.

Image and Media: I don't think any media is needed, but would be interested to see what kind of media you decide to use!

Overall: Overall, for such a short article it was very informative and well organized! I think a good challenge would be to include images and media.