User:Carlypaterson998/sandbox

HI Carly, this is vicky just trying out sending a note~

Is everything in the paragraph on Jesse's personal life relevant? It seems more like a prologue into his career rather than actually focusing on his personal life (I.e., childhood struggles, romantic life, what made him choose to take skiing professionally). Is the paragraph on his personal life from a neutral source? The website referencing his personal information seems more biased than neutral. It feels more like a friend of Jesse's wrote it about him than an unbiased third party. Are there any viewpoints that are over or underrepresented? In the paragraph on Jesse's career, there appears to be an over representation on his stats as an athlete, which should probably go under an "Accomplishments" paragraph. There should be more of an emphasis on how Jesse got started, and his journey on making it to the top professionally. Carlypaterson998 (talk) 01:26, 19 March 2018 (UTC)Carlypaterson998Carlypaterson998 (talk) 01:26, 19 March 2018 (UTC)

Olympic Results
🇨🇦 || 53rd
 * Sprint
 * Jesse Cockney
 * Jesse Cockney

🇨🇦 || 56th
 * 50 kilometre
 * Jesse Cockney

🇨🇦 || 12th
 * 4x10 kilometre relay
 * Jesse Cockney

🇨🇦 || 35th
 * Sprint
 * Jesse Cockney

Personal life
Cockney began skiing at the early age of three years old, in Yellowknife, Northwest Territories. He grew up with his father, Angus Cockney as a mentor both athletically and culturally. Cockney's heritage of being an Inuvialuit allowed him to learn from his father's tradtional carvings and stories. In Jesse's spare time away from his competitive athletic career, he enjoys to cook, climb, travel, watch and play American football, and fish.

Notable International & World Cup Results
In February 2017 at the PyeongChang test event, Jesse finished 10th overall in the classic sprint. His most recent competition was held at the 2018 Winter Olympics in PyeongChang, where he competed in the men's cross country skiing sprint classic, placing 35th overall.