User:Carlyroell/Saint Mark's Body Brought to Venice/Icecreamsandwichlove Peer Review

General info
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Carlyroell/Saint Mark's Body Brought to Venice
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Saint Mark's Body Brought to Venice

Evaluate the drafted changes
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I think your draft adds a lot to the article and think that it is very useful. If I were to add any information to the page, I would say you should add a section specifically on style of the piece. What is the meaning of the colors used? and how do people usually perceive them?

Another question that comes up to me when reading this article is was this piece controversial in any way?

Also, the links to the sources are not working so when you edit it, you can click on the citation button and click on the reuse button to make sure there is a link. Otherwise I think the editors might delete the text. :(

Overall I enjoyed reading the draft and think it was eye opening about Saint Mark's life in Egypt.