User:Carochen215/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Tetris Giant


 * Article Evaluation
 * This article features a pretty solid introduction, with a thorough explanation of what the game entails and how to play it. It explains the mechanics of the device as well as the different modes that it can be played in. The lead includes a description of the other sections in the article, however there aren't that many sections after the introductory paragraph. The only other section included is Game play. The content of the article is relevant to the topic, although, I think there are certain areas that could be expanded on in order to give the reader a clearer understanding of the topic itself. I think the tone of the article is pretty unbiased and gives information that is pretty objective. The image used is of the physical arcade game, which gives readers a nice visual for what it looks like.
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https://dl.acm.org/doi/abs/10.1145/2468356.2479490

https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/abs/pii/S0306460315002762

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Sweet Chili Sauce


 * Article Evaluation
 * The introduction states a brief description about the origins of sweet chili sauce and how it is used in different cuisines and it gives a blurb about the ingredients that are used to make it. It doesn't really expand on other content about the specific topic. I think some of the details in the introductory paragraph could be moved to other subsections, however, there aren't any other sections in the article that expand on the condiment. I think it would be interesting to know how different countries or cultures use sweet chili sauce in the foods that they make. The one source that is referenced doesn't seem to be very objective. I think it's more of a blog post about how the author would use sweet chili sauce. The image that is used is quite zoomed in, so it's slightly confusing as to what it really is.


 * Sources
 * http://agris.fao.org/agris-search/search.do?recordID=TH2008000750
 * http://agris.fao.org/agris-search/search.do?recordID=TH2008000751

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Luna Park, Tokyo
 * Article Evaluation
 * The introductory paragraph gives a decent description about the history of Luna Park, as well as who constructed it and how long it lasted. It doesn't really go in depth about what attractions were built and what activities you could participate in at the park. The introduction paragraph mostly goes over the eventual downfall of the park and how it connects to Japanese cinema. I think the article could be improved by expanding more on the purpose for why it was built. There also aren't any subsections that talk about the motion picture company and the person who was in charge of the whole operation, considering it was mentioned in the introductory paragraph. Overall, the tone of the article is quite neutral, and it doesn't seem to persuade the reader in one way or the other. There are many references for this article, however they seem quite outdated, the most current one being from 2006.
 * The introductory paragraph gives a decent description about the history of Luna Park, as well as who constructed it and how long it lasted. It doesn't really go in depth about what attractions were built and what activities you could participate in at the park. The introduction paragraph mostly goes over the eventual downfall of the park and how it connects to Japanese cinema. I think the article could be improved by expanding more on the purpose for why it was built. There also aren't any subsections that talk about the motion picture company and the person who was in charge of the whole operation, considering it was mentioned in the introductory paragraph. Overall, the tone of the article is quite neutral, and it doesn't seem to persuade the reader in one way or the other. There are many references for this article, however they seem quite outdated, the most current one being from 2006.


 * Sources
 * Mohun, Arwen P. “Amusement Parks for the World: The Export of American Technology and Know-How, 1900—1939.” Icon, vol. 19, 2013, pp. 100–112. JSTOR, www.jstor.org/stable/23788122. Accessed 21 Jan. 2020.

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