User:Caroleebaskin/Cathemerality/Psychstudent20 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Caroleebaskin


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Caroleebaskin/Cathemerality - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Cathemerality - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
The changes made to the article are very nice, I like your addition of more sections that add more information to the page, then what is seen in the original. I like your changes to the lead with your changes making the lead more concise when compared the original article. Your other sections could use additional references though. your "food quality" section makes references to studies and reports but lacks the references to back up this information. Your 'environmental factors" section also still has a "(cite)" in it, so i thought it would be worth mentioning. i would also consider adding some type of imagery to go along with the article, since both the original and your article have no pictures and this could add to the article. Overall, the changes you made are very detailed, with multiple addition information added that helps the readers understand the topic better.