User:Carolin Zion/Magnetospirillum/CalmPeach Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Carolin Zion and Mannsely


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Carolin Zion/Magnetospirillum
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Magnetospirillum

Lead
I do think that the additions to the lead would be good since this is missing information, and the original isn't very informative. It is a concise lead, and it is well written since it would flow better with the original.

Content
I like the addition of the formation and morphology section since none of this information is in the original. I think these would be great contributions to the page. The habitat sentences could use some work since they are choppy, I would probably make it into one or two sentences.

Tone/Balance
A section in the shape/arrangement section could be edited because it isn't neutral with, "although some have been found to have chaotic arrangements." Instead of this I would put that chaotic arrangements have been found in some species, or something along those lines for Wikipedia.

Sources/References
All of the sources are great, but I would add more citations like for the uses section, besides that I wouldn't change anything.

Table
I would fill out the table more since it is a required section. I recommend looking up biochemical characteristics of Magnetospirillum to find more information.

Organization
The organization is perfect in my opinion, so I wouldn't change it.

Overall Impressions
I had a great overall impression of the changes, but it does need a bit of work here and there. However, if you aren't looking for changes, I wouldn't have seen any of these issues besides the table being empty.

Good work! CalmPeach (talk) 21:23, 5 March 2022 (UTC)