User:Carolin Zion/Magnetospirillum/Itsmelanie Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

@Mannsley and @Carolin Zion


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Carolin%20Zion/Magnetospirillum?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Magnetospirillum

Evaluate the drafted changes
Magnetosomes

In this section, you do well at briefly overviewing what magnetosomes are and their association with your genus. You could included where magnetosomes are located in the cell and if these organelles are ever found in any other organisms. The very first sentence clealy explains that you are working with a bacteria genus. One suggestion: you could explain what a "biomineralization process" is. The table is formatted well, but the rest of the information still needs to be filled out. With the shape and formation section, think about inlcuding a picture so that peOople can more eaily understand the terms used--especially "cuboctehedrons."

Habitat

Although you have good, clear information here from reliable sources, if you look at the information that already exists in the article, this is not new. However, I do think that you wording is more clear. I would consider including your habitat section as an edit rather than an addition of information.

Genome

In this section, you make it clear that the genome exists becuase of a specific gene that codes for the formation of the magnetosomes. Is there a way to test for this gene? That could be an interesting addition!

Overall, I think your wording is very clear and can be easily understood. You do a great job of drawing information from your sources and turning it into your words. Do look for opportunities to embed links to other Wikipedia articles in the furture. For example, is there an existing page for magnetosomes? If so, you should link it! Finish filling out your table and fill in some details. You maintain an informative and neurtral tone throughout. Great job:)