User:Caroline.sonnen/Internet activism/MLBinker Peer Review

Hi Caroline,

You've an interesting topic here and I appreciate how you've zeroed-in on this section to edit.

Nice edit in the first sentence to provide clarity.

Further along, I agree with your decision to strike the ableist sentence "Internet activism is also the only way many people with disabilities can participate in activist work." This gives the final paragraph a more considerate, thoughtful feel.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Caroline.sonnen


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Caroline.sonnen/Internet_activism?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Internet activism

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Caroline,

You've an interesting topic here and I appreciate how you've zeroed-in on this section to edit.

Nice edit in the first sentence to provide clarity.

Further along, I agree with your decision to strike the ableist sentence "Internet activism is also the only way many people with disabilities can participate in activist work." This gives the final paragraph a more considerate, thoughtful feel.