User:Caroline.t1202/Lymphatic filariasis/Erinhansonuwec Peer Review

General info
Caroline.t1202
 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lymphatic filariasis
 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Caroline.t1202/Lymphatic_filariasis?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * I like the additions to the lead! Be sure to add "one hundred" for the first addition in bold but other than that great addition
 * The addition on how the worms reproduce in the body is great!
 * The addition of the fact that several mosquito bites are needed to get the disease is also a great addition. It helps ease the mind of some people because there are some diseases where it only takes one. Do all of the mosquitoes that bite need to carry the same parasitic worm, or could they still transmit the disease with different species?
 * For the large section on treatment and drugs that you added, is there a source for that information? I could just be missing it.
 * The additions to the epidemiology section are great, I may have missed it but is there a source for the big, bolded paragraph?
 * In the epidemiology section, it could be beneficial to include further information about demographics, specifically any demographic information about who is most affected, beyond just certain geographic regions. You mentioned where treatment is being focused, but the more specific demographic information is above in the differential diagnosis section.
 * You could also include a progression of the disease over time in the epidemiology section. Most of the information about the disease in the past refers to treatments, but I think it could be interesting to learn how reported cases have changed over time, and it could reveal more about how the disease has spread and been treated in public health.