User:Caroline.t1202/Lymphatic filariasis/Kyleechoate Peer Review

General info
caroline.t1202
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Caroline.t1202/Lymphatic_filariasis?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template ::Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: Overall, I think what you've added to the Lead section improves the quality, however, there is one minor spelling error where you stated, "...impacting hundred(s) of million people..."

Diagnosis: In this section I like how you included how the prevalence differs in males and females, but I think it would be good to add a sentence or two on the prevalence in males specifically. You had mentioned that the disease is lower in women at reproductive age and that it has a later onset in females, so I think it would improve the article quality if you talked more about the demographics of males affected.

Treatment: Capitalization error in the sentence "In (C)ertain settings a mixture..." I think the sentence "however in combination with DEC drugs have been found..." could be reworded to, "however, when combined with DEC drugs, it has been found that..." I think this may have a better flow to it. Otherwise, I love that you added the section about how Albendazole works and specifically, how it kills the parasite.