User:Carolinelamarjewell/Margo Grant Walsh/Rafaelegb Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Carolinelamarjewell


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Carolinelamarjewell/Margo Grant Walsh
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Margo Grant Walsh

Evaluate the drafted changes
Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think you did a good job bulleting the information to create a timeline of this designer. Some things that I think could benefit your article are to transform the bulleted points into paragraph form in order to create a more extensive explanation on them. Pictures could benefit as well, a visual representation s nice because it conects the information with our eyes and helps understand better the information.