User:Carolinelamarjewell/Margo Grant Walsh/Thanninen Peer Review

Lead


 * The lead is is very informative and there is a section for things that are mentioned - Make sure your lead is updated when or if you add new sections

Content


 * I think most of the information in the sandbox will go well under the "Early Life and Education" and "Professional Career" sections

Sources & References

Organization
 * There is a notability notice on the article.. Make sure your references that you use or that are currently there are cited properly or has significant coverage.
 * Reference 15 - the page was not found, check link(s)
 * The article is easy to read!
 * There is a section for everything that is mentioned in the lead
 * no spelling errors

Images & Media


 * Images would be really insightful!
 * Images of silver collection?
 * Images of her work?
 * Images of installation?

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)