User:Carrington24/Capital punishment in the United States/Dc9018 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Capital punishment in the United States


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Carrington24/Capital_punishment_in_the_United_States?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Carrington24/Capital_punishment_in_the_United_States?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)


 * Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic? Is there anything that distracted you?
 * -     Great article overall, all of the of the information is relevant to the article.
 * Is the article neutral? Are there any claims, or frames, that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
 * -    The article is neutral as it just brings up fact on how black men are given capital punishment at a disproportionate rate without taking a position on it.
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
 * Check the citations. Do the links work? Does the source support the claims in the article?
 * -    The citation links work and the sources do support the claims in the article.
 * Is each fact supported by an appropriate, reliable reference? Where does the information come from? Are these neutral sources? If biased, is that bias noted?
 * -     Yes the information comes from reliable sources like articles and non-bias reliable websites.
 * Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that should be added?

-      The information in terms of the website has been recently updated so it is not out of date. All of the articles have been published within the last 10 years so I do also believe that they are also still relevant.

Overall, I believe this is a really good article. I would make a change, this may be based on personal preference, but when the page starts talking about how capital punishment still disproportionately affects black males, thats when I would add the information from the from the first paragraph and the differences between races and rates of capital punishment.