User:Carrington24/Capital punishment in the United States/Jasonbb1233 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Capital Punishment in the US


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Carrington24/Capital_punishment_in_the_United_States?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Carrington24/Capital_punishment_in_the_United_States?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
I liked the statistics that you used in the beginning of the article, I think it did a good job of making the disparities clear and pronounced. it also was relatively balanced and neutral which adheres to the wiki guidelines. I think the information is also extremely relevant and a great addition to the original page. One thing that can be improved on is the amount of material. I think you can make some of the latter sections a bit more robust by adding more statistics or sections. Maybe a story of notable cases where people were wrongfully convicted. However, I think that you guys did a great job overall, and perhaps you are still making some additions.