User:Carrington24/Capital punishment in the United States/Nc2428 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Carrington24)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Carrington24/Capital_punishment_in_the_United_States?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Capital punishment in the United States

Evaluate the drafted changes
Evaluation of the proposed lead Among Races and the sections about Racial History and Discrimination in Mass Incarceration and Capital Punishment

Lead:

The lead is clear and concise, which is great. However, it would be useful to provide the statistics on the percentage of white people that are on death-row as well as how many white people are wrongfully convicted, so that one can compare it to the percentage of black people on death row and the percentage of wrongfully convicted black people.

Content:

The content is relevant to the topic (Capital punishment in the United States) and it is also up to date. The sources are trustworthy too. The sections proposed certainly address Wikipedia's equity gaps.

Tone and Balance:

The content added is neutral and not biased to a particular position.

Sources and References:

The sources and references are from reliable sources and they are relevant and up to date in respect to the topic. You can work on improving the spectrum of authors that these sources come from.

Organization:

The content is organized, well-written, and concise.

Overall:

The additional sections that you are proposing to add are great since they are neutral, come from reliable sources, and are relevant to the topic.