User:CarsonJones06/Environmental Communication/Cameronsimons24 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

CarsonJones06


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Talk:Environmental communication - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Environmental communication - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead: The lead gives plenty of information along with background information regarding what environmental communication is along with links within to access for further knowledge on what is going on. I do not see quotes very often on wiki pages and to open with one was very surprising to me. While the quote is very well written, if possible, try to not use the quote. The quote is also not cited from what I could find and therefore needs a citation.

Content: The content for this topic is likely not going to change over time in my opinion and therefore the use of talking about a book from 2004 may not be considered outdated for this particular topic (in academia section). For the Limitations section, I like how you talk about political change which I believe is a very important and one of the main topics that i think about regarding environmental communication.

Tone and Balance: The tone is fairly straight forward but could be more direct with factual information. There is balance with no sections appearing to have more focus or bias regarding the topic.

Sources and References: The sources are all working along with the links to other wiki articles. The references page is done correctly and works.

Organization: I think the wiki page is well organized but maybe the limitations section should go after symbolic action. This may be my personal preference, but I think that limitations would fit well towards the end of the wiki article.

Images and Media: There are no images that you added but there are some on the actual page. Maybe a picture with environmental communication in action at a political debate would be good. A reference to this debate or speech would be useful as well.

Overall Impressions: Overall I think this is a very important page to be editing and talking about. As environmental factors of human actions become more and more talked about, a topic of environmental communication should be known about. I think more references to newer information would be very useful for this page but the information that is on here is a very good start to what this page can hopefully become one day.