User:Carsonhernandez/Afro-Brazilian Music/Smorgan12 Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Carsonhernandez


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 * User:Carsonhernandez/Afro-Brazilian Music
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What you have is well written, interesting, and concise. It's also very neutral and has links to other pages. I think overall I would want to learn more about Afro-Brazilian music from this page. Where did it start, and how? Who plays afro-brazilian music today, and how has the genre evolved? How exactly did the artists you mention influence afro-brazilian culture, or were they themselves influenced by afro-brazilian culture, and how?

It would also be cool to find pictures of the unique instruments you mention, and maybe link some of the music itself to the page.