User:Carsonhernandez/Afro-Brazilian Music/Wellsl4 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Carsonhernandez


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Carsonhernandez/Afro-Brazilian_Music?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

This was a really well-thought-out article. The amounts of musical genres referenced in the article was excellent. Maybe look into more the influence of slavery on Brazilian music.

The lead was good, maybe add more to the content. This is a great article to connect English speakers with Brazilian culture. Music is also a great topic since everyone can relate at least a little bit.