User:Carsonhernandez/Cultura Afro-brasileira/Jcookie7 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Carson Hernandez


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Carsonhernandez/Cultura Afro-brasileira
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
None of what is present in your article distracts from the topic, although I think that there is a lack of information in general. The article does a good job of maintaining neutrality. It is hard for me to tell if any viewpoints are being over represented or under represented because there are not many details, but this question may not be relevant to this article at all anyways. The link to the source works, though I did not see a clear mention of the cited material in the paper abstract. That does not mean that it isn't in the paper. I think a few more citations could be helpful, but the source that is there appears neutral. I think this is a good draft, but that it needs a little more info.