User:Carter4444/Environmental anthropology/Greenmuffinsonly Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

@Carter4444


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Carter4444/Environmental anthropology
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Environmental anthropology

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead of the article has been updated to more accurately reflect the article topic and provide a better introduction to environmental anthropology. It is concise and completes every requirement posed by the guiding questions.

The content is relevant, up to date, and does not deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps or underrepresented populations. The content added is neutral and does not appear biased in any way.

I do think that the cultural diversity section could be a little bit more clear- The following sentence is a bit confusing and run-on. "There is a renewed focus of environmental anthropology on cultural variation and diversity. Such factors like environmental disasters (floods, earthquakes, frost), migrations, cost & benefit ratio, contact/ associations, external ideas (trade/ latent capitalism boom), along with internal, independent logic and inter-connectivity's impact now were observed." Does this mean that the new approach uses environmental anthropology to analyze and explain cultural diversity? For example, historical prevalence of heavy flooding alters cultural behaviors? I think this entire section could be improved a bit- I found myself feeling confused and had to re-read the section a couple of times to grasp the concept.

I also think it may be helpful to add a sentence after this one in your climate change section- "While sociological research on climate change is emerging and ongoing, there is a global push to recognize global communities in the context of their ecologies, as well as their places in history ". You could add a statement (Or even better, a simple example) going into a little more detail about what this means, and how warming temperatures are changing the field. You could also describe what specific factors about local climate have caused places like the Indus valley to flourish.

The list of sources is great- well compiled and very extensive in support of the topic.

Overall, I think this is a great draft. I would just add a few sentences to provide further detail and examples that may help a non-scientific audience gain a better understanding.