User:CarterWiser/JID

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1)Original: Route eventually moved in with Doctur Dot and Johnny Venus from EarthGang who he met during his time in Virginia.

Revised: Route eventually moved in with Doctur Dot and Johnny Venus a popular rap duo with the stage name EarthGang who he met while at school in Virginia.

2)Original: He received a scholarship to play NCAA Division I football at Hampton University, where he redshirted his first year, then played two seasons before he was kicked off the team.

Revised: He received a full athletic scholarship to play NCAA Division I football at Hampton University, Route was redshirted his first year of eligibility and then played two seasons before he was kicked from the team for skipping practices.

3) Add: In the Discography heading under collaborative albums there needs to be the most recent collaborative album "D-Day: A Gangsta Grillz Mixtape" at the bottom of the list.

4) Add in Forever Story Tab: JID's father talks about how he felt once the artist was kicked out of school and came back to live with him in Atlanta, Georgia.

5)Add: More Information for how the artists most recent album was produced in an interview with one of the main producers credited on the album.

6)Original: The tour includes 26 dates starting in May, and features supporting acts Saba, Deante' Hitchcock, and Mereba.

Revised: The tour did include 26 dates that started in May, and featured supporting acts Saba, Deante' Hitchcock, and Mereba.

7)Add: "Down Bad" was nominated for Best Rap Performance at the 62nd Grammy Awards.

8)Add: Revenge of the Dreamers III.was nominated Best Rap Album at the 62nd Grammy Awards.

=== '''In the Wikipedia article for the Hip-Hop artist JID ,there are many different areas that could use more information and some different grammatical errors that need fixing. First I would like to address the early life heading on the page and give more information on his the artist's upbringing. Overall there is not enough information even though many significant parts of how he became an artist like meeting a pair of artists he would still be making music with after he gained fame and notoriety. JID met the rap duo Earthgang while he was in college at Hampton University in Virginia they would be some of the first people to let the artist actually record his music. On the page, there should be more information in the influences tab. In the first part of the article they talk about some of JID's influences while he was growing up but when you scroll down to that tab it just briefly mentions some of them and moves on, these should state whichever artist he maybe took after but also what he enjoyed about each artist and what he is was able to learn from them. There also is the part where the artist was kicked out of his college and his scholarship to play football there was taken after allegedly skipping practices I also found an article saying he was accused of stealing supplies but the incident still has very little information around it. In the discography portion, no one added his most recent collaborative album D-Day with Dreamville. There is also his time after he was kicked out of school and thrown back to the streets of his hometown of Atlanta which his father then told him you have to work for what you want pushing JID to work harder which is mentioned on the song "2007".''' ===