User:Carterlockwood1/Political communication/Kscourtney8 Peer Review

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User:Carterlockwood1/Political communication
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Evaluate the drafted changes
I would say that everything you have put down has been really good so far and very in-depth. I would suggest maybe even making the update a little less wordy. I would also suggest having adding even more recent examples if that is possible.