User:Carterlockwood1/Political communication/Lindseywilmot16 Peer Review

General info
I am peer reviewing Carter Lockwood's work.
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Carterlockwood1/Political communication
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Political communication

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think what you've included in your draft changes is really well thought out!

One thing I would suggest would be straying away from is trying to expand the general definition of political communication - I feel like that section is pretty well covered in the article and it may be hard to change / add to.

Here are a few sources you could use while editing:


 * 1) https://www.researchgate.net/publication/265245692_Effects_of_New_Media_Technologies_on_Political_Communication Effects of New Media Technologies on Political Communication