User:Carterrrd/Traditional medicine/Maria.arriaga22 Peer Review

General info
I will be reviewing User:Carterrrd article on Traditional Medicine.
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Carterrrd/Traditional medicine
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Traditional medicine

Evaluate the drafted changes
Good article to discuss on. I would suggest providing more information what Traditional Medicine is in the first paragraph of the article draft. Loved how there should be changes to improve the article. I see a few awkward sentences in the lead. (Nothing too serious). Another suggestion could be to reorganize the lead a little bit more. Overall, the draft was good.