User:Casademasa/Surveillance Protests/Thisismyusername31 Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jenna, Casademasa


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Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall a good structure and draft for the Wikipedia article that provides a general overview of surveillance protesting. The lead section gives a good general outline of the definition of surveillance protesting.The second section that details the context of surveillance protesting flow naturally from its definition and gives the reader important details on its general history. I think it could be helpful to provide in the lead section more information on what to expect for the rest of the article and an outline for what is to be expected. Also, it may be helpful to also include more information on surveillance protesting in other regions of the world because at the moment it gives a good representation of what surveillance protesting is like in the United States. It might be helpful to also have international context on what is happening in other regions. I also found it helpful to have different sections for each different political movement because it makes the article easy to read and draws attention to each specific event. I think this topic is really interesting and I'm looking forward to learning more!