User:Caseymen/Skateboard/Planti345 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Caseymen


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Skateboard- Wheels
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Skateboard

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

- The lead is understandable and concise, and introduces a quick history to skateboarding.

- The lead also mentions the article title added, which was about wheels.

Content

- The content is relevant to the topic of the article and on wheels and what kind of wheels are typical used and recommended for certain skateboards.

- The content is up to date, and does not seem to be missing any information or have any gaps. If possible, consider adding more attributes of each kind of wheel.

Tone and Balance

- The tone of this article does not sound biased, and is neutral in all statements.

- The article does not try to persuade the reader to buy a certain type of wheel, but rather informs on which type would be best for their skateboard.

Sources and References

- The sources used are relevant and up to date to today's world, as the sources are from 2022.

- The sources reflect the content within the article with the sources talking about choosing the right skateboard wheels and understand how skateboard wheels work.

Organization

- The content has two grammatically errors, with one having deck misspelled as "desk" in the lead, and then when talking about "Larger wheels are heavier in weight, which are better for maintaining speed and longer distances."

- Make sure to add another image on your topic and caption it accordingly.

Overall

- The content added improves the original articles as the original goes of the history and other components of the skateboard, which this article flows with accordingly. Readers will be able to learn about which type of wheels they should be putting on the skateboard for the best performance without any bias.