User:Caseys breakfast pizza/Neighborhood watch/Blairrogers01 Peer Review

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Caseys breakfast pizza/Neighborhood watch
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 * Neighborhood watch

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I think you guys have a good start on your article! I like that you guys looked at the original page for "Neighborhood Watch" and saw that they had some incorrect information, as well as uncited information, regarding them being vigilante organizations and fixed it. This fills in gaps that the original article possessed. I think you did good at keeping it balanced by saying that while some neighborhood watches are not vigilante organizations, not all are. Additionally, your references look good, but there are only two, so try to add one more! The organization of the paper looks good as well, but maybe on the original article you could add a Title for the first bit of information on there. Overall, great job!