User:Caseys breakfast pizza/Neighborhood watch/JaxC135 Peer Review

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Caseys Breakfast Pizza, Kebhfp, Aysiagrey
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Caseys breakfast pizza/Neighborhood watch
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Neighborhood watch

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Be sure to add a lead to your draft to reflect the new content you want to add, and add a description of the specific work you will be adding.

I do feel your content is mostly up to date, but it may be a good idea (and get you an extra source) if you talk about neighborhood watches in covid times. It could be good to look into whether watches increased or decreased during the pandemic.

It would be beneficial, in my opinion, to specify that not all groups considered vigilante are good and there is the chance that the crime that these groups handle may not be in the best way possible. (there are some examples but it would be good to restate in the part you are going to insert.

Your articles look good, they focus on your topic effectively. You do need to get another source because you only have 2. It may be good to look into policing strategies, like you mentioned, and how those affect neighbourhood watches, whether good or bad.

Both of your links do in fact work and were easy to navigate through.

I think it could be interesting if you added an image into the article. There are already quite a few sign photos, but it may be a good idea to look into if there are other forms of warning for neighborhood watch like newspaper articles or fliers.

Overall, I think your addition is important because, from what I can see, there is a lack of the use of vigilantism, even when it is added as a reference in the article.