User:Cashworth6/Forebulge

Content
Everything seems to be pertinent to the article. The physics sub-topic is slightly distracting, but I think with further explanation it will tie in better to the article. The material is slightly dense as it is currently presented and some of the terminologies need to be explained further or have links to other pages (ie. subsidence). Most of the other links work and are helpful in understanding the topic. I think it can be written in a way that makes it more accessible to everyone.

I will add another section on sea-level rise and effects of glacial melting as well as flesh out the tectonics and physics sections.

Tone
The tone is neutral. The Glacial sub-topic seems to be more heavily represented than the others. There is some redundant phrasing ("Because...", "The ___") that can be improved. There is a lot of jargon used that makes the article difficult to understand. I would suggest explaining it with the glacier example in the lead paragraph. For example, "Forebulge is the bulging up of a portion of land caused by a load created on the other portion of land that compresses the land underneath it. One example is a glacier, which creates a load on one part of the land, causes the land around the compressed area to appear to bulge."

Talk Page
Forebulge is a part of WikiProject Geology but is ranked a low-importance article for this project. It is currently a stub class, which means it could use some improvement. There is currently only one comment I can see on the talk page. It seems the other contributor is suggesting there is an error in how forebulge is being described. It appears he acknowledges that forebulge can be attributed to multiple factors, not just the mantle. This is something I will study as I edit this page and add if deemed appropriate.

Cashworth6 (talk) 19:11, 14 October 2021 (UTC)