User:Casscake/Social issue/Sky1405 Peer Review

General info
Casscake
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Casscake/Social issue
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Evaluate the drafted changes
What they added went right along with the article they were reading. All their sentences we clear and easy to read. The references they used were very realiable and I enjoyed reading what they had to add to the article. Overall a good draft.