User:Casseygray/Behavioral activation/Mrs.Egyptian Peer Review

General info
Casseygray
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Casseygray/Behavioral activation - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Behavioral activation - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
I noticed there are no pictures present and a very limited draft. I went back to the initial article and saw the layout and how it was formatted. I believe the flow of the article is in a good realm, so if you are able to add more sources that would be great. I see that you currently have one source/reference, and it is a website. I know that we need at least two peer reviewed articles so keep that in mind as well. I also observed that there were no pictures added. I am not sure if this topic necessarily involves a picture, but keep in mind that you could add one. All in all from what I can see the tone is well within the paper. Just be mindful of adding pictures and getting more sources.