User:Casseygray/Behavioral activation/Uiseon1012 Peer Review

General info
Casseygray
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Casseygray/Behavioral_activation?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Behavioral Activation: Behavioral activation:

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi, Cassey! I enjoyed reading your article about behavioral activation. Overall, your statement explains the additional information that may reader wants to know. Also, your explanation was concise and neutral in tone, but I was questioning if your source is a secondary resource. Your statement met the criteria of Wikipedia writing direction, but it would be nicer if you used a reliable citation to prove your statements.