User:Cassidybohne/Raunch aesthetics/EmilyInman Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Cassidybohne


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Cassidybohne/Raunch aesthetics


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Raunch aesthetics

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article looks like it has a lot of room to grow and be expanded upon using the ideas that you have in your sandbox! You could also break down the part where it talks about slut shaming and the hyper-sexualization of women and bring in the effects that these practices have on specifically Women of Color as opposed to their white counterparts, considering you are going to mention Chloe Bailey.

You could also talk about how these artist are speaking out about slut shaming and encouraging women to embrace their sexuality. Are they joining any campaigns? What kind of messages do they send on social media? What are the effects of their behavior and the movement of embracing female sexuality in general?