User:Cassierodrique/Masooma Ranalvi/Samanthadownes Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Cassierodrique


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Masooma Ranalvi


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

This is a great article. The inly thing I would say is keep in mind gender bias when adding things such as "her story". Try to be neutral when possible.