User:CassiopeiaDream/Environmental racism in the United States/Menace55 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

CassiopeiaDream


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Environmental racism in the United States / Draft by student was not complete
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Environmental racism in the United States

Evaluate the drafted changes
LEAD

- I believe the lead should start with a brief description of the concept of environmental racism then leading it into a historic background and how it connects to the United States.

- Make sure the lead only includes what is going to be discussed in this article and accurately describe the articles topic

CONTENT

* Possible Key Concepts to touch up on*

- Health affects: talk about the difference in health care and insurance from those who have money and those in poverty

- Policy Responses: there is only one sentence that is describing this concept, help broaden what policy responses due and what it takes to pass ordinances

SOURCES AND REFERENCES

- There could be alot of information on this topic from outside sources

ORGANIZATION

- Try and keep the content in a way where its easy to follow and connect to each different discussion

IMAGES AND MEDIA

- Adding media sources and references to help back up your basis in the lead and content

'''OVERALL IMPRESSIONS '''- Was not completed