User:CassiopeiaDream/Environmental racism in the United States/Sleepwalker1999 Peer Review

I cannot see what you guys are working on but for the article I was thinking you can add more about indigenous people and possibly apply some of the things we have learned in class to add to the whole page. I think adding some of the things we have learned in class will definitely begin to make this article pop with some information about indigenous people and the ill effects that environmentalism has done to some groups of people.

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