User:Catherinepeshek/Eclogite/KRose4 Peer Review


 * Good overall job on the additions so far! I think they add necessary content to the article and it's supported with a good number of sources. I have a few suggestions about how the article can be improved.
 * I would suggest updating the lead to reflect the new content you are going to add. If you want to take that a step further, then I think the overall article could be summarized a bit better in the lead section.
 * Not sure if you're planning on editing other sections of the article, but if so there is a lack of citations for the majority of the information presented. Adding in citations would greatly improve the article.
 * The citations you added are good. The only suggestion I have is not all of the sentences in the 2nd paragraph have references and they are presenting material that should be cited. Citations would be helpful there.
 * The sentence in the third paragraph is confusing me. I'm not sure I get what it is saying, so maybe rewording it or expanding on it would be a good idea.
 * Great job!