User:Cathymeng123/be bold

Article evaluation

Wikipedia talk:Canadian Wikipedians' notice board

Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic? Is there anything that distracted you?

The article itself is written in a neutral tone, with multiple citations dedicated to each heading. However, I feel that the History section puts a lot of emphasis on Native American's struggle on the topic. I would have loved to see more historical context surrounding the history of LGBTQ rights in Canada, stemming from the influence of British culture. This can include the treatment of LGBTQ community before Canada became a British colony, back in Europe. A context in refugees and asylum as a part of the factors and thereby the population of migration from Europe to a new continent would also be relevant.