User:CattleGirl/todo

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 * Cattle judging
 * Metung
 * Lakes Entrance
 * Royal Melbourne Show
 * Charolais cattle
 * Red Angus
 * Animal Tracks
 * Epilepsy in animals
 * Texel (sheep)
 * Romney (sheep)
 * Angus cattle

Cattle judging

 * re-write entire article.
 * Remove how-to sections. Remove 'you' and replace with 'the judge will', etc
 * re-word article
 * more on history of judging

My talk page

 * Hi CattleGirl. Great job writing the cattle judging article. It has a lot of useful content in it. But there is one problem: Wikipedia is an encyclopedia, so articles should be encyclopedic with a neutral point of view. At this time, the cattle judging article is more like a manual on how to judge cattle instead of information about cattle judging. As I know nothing about the subject, I am unfortunately unable to make these improvements myself. So it would be wonderful is you could take the time to rewrite the article, with these considerations in mind. For more information, consult Wikpedia guidelines like what wikipedia is not. --Stijn Vermeeren 19:41, 10 September 2006 (UTC)


 * You can include some about how to judge, but not so much as right now. Have an eye for every aspect. In the introduction, write some lines about what is is, very generally, for people who do not know what cattle judging is. Then in the article, you can write about the where (on what occasions) one judges cattle, which people judge cattle and why they do so, about the history of this habit... Also, try not to talk to the reader (When you are judging cattle, you want to), but write from a neutral, third person's perspective (Wikipedia is after all an encyclopedia). I hope you find these remarks helpful in improving the cattle judging article, and other articles you might write in the future. --Stijn Vermeeren 11:25, 11 September 2006 (UTC)

Metung

 * Notes on the history of it,
 * description,
 * annual events,
 * 'famous for',
 * etc.

Lakes Entrance

 * Notes on the history of it,
 * description,
 * annual events,
 * 'famous for',
 * etc.

Royal Melbourne Show

 * Expand-
 * Events


 * Places
 * History
 * The new showgrounds

Charolais cattle

 * Expand all-
 * History
 * Appearance
 * Breed organisations
 * Famous shows
 * Famous cattle

Red Angus

 * Differences between Red and Black Angus
 * Attributes of red angus
 * SEE talk page
 * More informations on the genetics for people who do not understand it as well or who do not know what it is. Mendellian Inheritance
 * Maybe more about the attributes of red angus as beef cattle?

Animal Tracks

 * Expand entire article

Epilepsy in animals

 * Expand entire article

Texel (sheep)

 * Expand article
 * tag for how-to if that hasn't changed.
 * remove 'how to judge- maybe start another article or move to wikibooks?

Romney (sheep)

 * Expand entire article

Angus cattle

 * Expand article, make sure there is no reason to merge the two articles as they are two separate breeds.
 * Emphasise that they are two separate breeds in the article.