User:Cawna89/History of leprosy/DianaatOU Peer Review

1-Everything looks good, just minor grammar errors i.e., the way sentences flow. Great job otherwise!

2-Try providing complete sentences instead of bullet points.

3- A stuffy note change to a stuffy nose

4- add commas where the sentence starts "some symptoms, such as .. skin,  ( if no complete sentences are added)

5- are mainly change to "mainly are ..."

6- add period after them. on the discolored patches sentence.

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