User:Cawna89/History of leprosy/Jaguilar101 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Cawna89


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cawna89/History_of_leprosy?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * History of leprosy
 * History of leprosy

Evaluate the drafted changes
There is no lead written, so questions about lead are inapplicable. Data added is relatively relevant to the topic. A majority of it is about the symptoms of Leprosy. While helpful, I feel like there might actually be a Wikipedia article specifically for Leprosy and its symptoms that could be linked to this article. Meaning, this article is for Leprosy’s history, not so much what it is per say. I feel like if there was a brief overview of symptoms and a link to the other article this will be more successful in helping readers overall. Adding the section about History of Leprosy in the Americas is an excellent choice however. Content added does address the topic with a historically underrepresented population, being the Native Americans.

Content added is neutral, and there is no persuasion to one side or another. All information provided is backed by sources that are easily accessible and ready. Sources used are all current and relevant. All links work, however I couldn’t fully load the article “On the Origin of Leprosy”.

As far as writing, there is only one paragraph to review, as the rest is simply a list. It is written well, so no worries there. There was one minor spelling error where it reads “A stuffy note” instead of what I think should be “A stuffy nose”. Besides that, everything looks well organized.

There are no images added nor is this a new article so those questions are inapplicable.

Overall I feel like this is a good start for adding to the article! I really think a shortened list of symptoms and a connection to the other Wikipedia article would be a better way to go. If the person reading it is more curious about Leprosy as a sickness rather than its history, they can go elsewhere to read about it. Good addition of the history of leprosy in the Americas though!